General Problems:

With the ID. Up to three points. The map illustrates a number of elements, not just revolts, important tho they are, but also the system of alliances that had developed.

With the essay. up to ten points, five for formulation and five for substantiation. Most understood the general concepts quite well

• failure to read and understand the question. E.g., formation of the polis, not of the Delian League,
• failure to provide 'word for word' citation of critical evidence; citations used to link ideas instead of demonstrating a proposition, evidence given did not prove what was claimed,
• poor formulation...another rigorous re-drafting would have improved the paper significantly. lack of coherence. forcing the issue [hard to see how the conquest of Messenia can count as inclusion or compromise.