PIZZAZ-Cinquain Poems

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INFORMATION

ESL Student Level: High Beginner+
Description: Diamond-shaped poems with 5 lines. Incorporates oral, analytical thinking, reading and writing skills.

Sample Cinquain

War
by Saud

War
Sad, destructive
Killing, injuring, destroying
A thing that kills life.
Terminator



WARM-UP ACTIVITIES

Briefly examine structured forms of poetry from students' native languages as an introduction, eg. haiku poems from Japanese. In our class, we often link the cinquaines to things such as a nature walk just off campus, closure for a certain class activity/unit, end-of-term remembrance, etc.

NOTE: As an alternative, consider diamond-shaped diamante poems, for a related but slightly more complex form of poetry.


INSTRUCTIONS

  1. Students work in small groups of 3-5. Each group has one example poem, and the tasks:
    a) Identify the structure / form of the poem (what are the parts of speech in each line); and,
    b) Report orally and informally to the rest of the class on the feeling / tone of the poem.
    c) Answer the question: What is the relationship between the first and last lines?
    Students can use dictionaries, as necessary, to figure out unfamiliar words.

  2. Students report on their assigned poems. (Optional: students practice with the instructor orally beforehand and then read their assigned poem to the class.)
    The structural form is then written on the board or screen and/or presented on a handout. Example:

    Line 1: War = 1 NOUN-A
    Line 2: Sad, destructive = 2 related ADJECTIVES
    Line 3: Killing, injuring, destroying = 3 descriptive GERUNDS (verb + -ing)
    Line 4: A thing that kills life. = 1 complete, related SENTENCE
    Line 5: Terminator = 1 NOUN-B (a synonym of NOUN-A)

  3. Students' observations regarding synonyms, parts of speech on each line, emotional tone, etc. are also discussed / outlined clearly.

  4. Individual groups then "brainstorm" as many possible pairs of synonyms as they can create. The teacher puts the pairs up on the board / overhead screen as suggestions (eg. vacation-holidays, artist-creator, Paris-paradise, life-journey, , ......). Students can use a dictionary and/or thesaurus.

  5. Students and the instructor choose one of the brainstormed topics and write a cinquaine poem together on the board / overhead screen. Optional: copy it down and add it to the class collection if a class anthology is in the works.

  6. Working individually with a template (see sample below), students write one or more cinquaines on the subject(s) of their choice. (Poems can also be written or transferred onto a computer VIA a teacher-prepared template.)

SAMPLE POEMS TO USE IN CLASS

(written by adult intermediate-level ESL students)

River
by Miki

River
Clear, wonderful
Slapping, whirling, flowing
The river is cold.
Water



Nature
by Khaled

Nature
Beautiful, pure
Refreshing, enjoying, relaxing
Nature is healthy.
Fun



Dove
by Min

Dove
Active, free
Flying, sitting, crying
A dove is free.
Bird



Eel
by Miki

Eel
Greasy, long
Winding, swimming, moving
An eel is strange.
Fish


Make up your own examples, using simpler or more complex vocabulary/topics, to tailor this activity to your particular students' level.



TEMPLATE



Title of Poem
Author's Name

_________________
_____________, ___________
_______________, ______________, _______________
____________________________________________________ .
__________________



FOLLOW-UP ACTIVITIES

  1. Students' work can be compiled into a class anthology for reading, autographing, souvenirs, and so on.
  2. Illustrate poems with handrawn or computer-generated images.



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Leslie Opp-Beckman, Technology Coordinator and ESL Instructor
E-mail: leslieob@uoregon.edu
5212 University of Oregon, American English Institute
Eugene, Oregon 97403-5212 USA
Leslie Opp-Beckman, copyright 1994-2003. Permission to copy and distribute for in-class, non-profit use only.
URL: http://www.uoregon.edu/~leslieob/pizzaz.html
This page last updated: 13 August 2003